If You Build It, They Don’t Necessarily Come: The Heaven and Hell of Marketing a Book

For all you writers, aspiring writers, and published authors out there, this is a must read article from an author who’s been in the business for a while. Read the whole article – it’s worth the long read – take notes then just keep writing!

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Warning: this post is long and all about publishing. Possibly boring, do not feel bad if you skip or bail.

I have this thing I do where I troll online booksellers, the NYT list, the USA Today list, and every goddamn list there is out there to follow. I watch Bookscan (nearly useless for me since it’s print books and the majority of my sales are electronic and they don’t go there). Basically I read every tea leaf I can, doing everything in my power to distill the mist surrounding sales in book publishing. I hold the lists against events I do and try to decide if that step up on Amazon was because of that great ink I got, or I wonder why the hell the day I got great ink I fell. I watch the progress of my peers’ books and the people I wish were my…

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Inspirational Tuesday – Writing A Novel Without An Outline

I have decided to start a weekly blog post here on my editing blog called Inspirational Mondays specifically to inspire writers because, after all, editors need writers to keep writing. Otherwise, what would we have to edit? This week’s post is on Tuesday…because Mondays are hectic and chaotic.

This week’s Inspirational tip: Write Without An Outline!

“Even as a teenager I thought outlining was counterintuitive to the writing process.” – Steven James

Are you a “pantser”? In other words, a “by the seat of the pants” writer.

By that I mean, are you a writer that writes a story without having carefully plotted it out or filled out an outline?

If you are, there is no need to worry. You are not alone, and it is possible to write a novel without outlines.

Outlining is still widely taught, but Steven James, a wise man who earned a master’s degree in storytelling and teaches writing seminars across North America, thinks that there is a better way.

In an article written for WritersDigest.com, James offers six tips to write a novel without an outline.

1. Re-evaluate what you’ve heard about story.

On this topic, James has this to say:

“Remember: What your story really needs is an orientation, a crisis or calling that disrupts normal life, relentless escalation of tension, and a satisfying climax. Along the way, you’ll need to make sure readers are compelled to empathize and connect with the main character(s), feel enough emotion to stay intrigued by the story, and gain enough insight to see the world with new eyes when they’re done.”

2. Let narrative forces rather than formulas drive your story forward.

As you write, think about how different narrative forces (escalation of tension, believability, continuity, voice, setting, and more) interact and form the story. James writes an example of the thought process:

OK, I need to escalate this chase scene—I had a foot chase before, so I can’t do that again. Maybe a helicopter chase? But will that be believable? Well, I’ll need to foreshadow that someone knows how to fly the helicopter and make it inevitable that they end up at the helicopter landing pad at this moment of the story. But does that fit in with the pace right here? Can I pull this off without relying on narrative gimmicks or coincidences?”

3. Follow rabbit trails.

It’s easy to get sidetracked, isn’t it? But those thoughts shouldn’t be ignored, James argues.

“[Rabbit trails are] inherent to the creative process. Who knows? What you at first thought was just a rabbit trail leading nowhere in particular might take you to a breathtaking overlook that eclipses everything you previously had in mind.”

4. Write from the center of the paradox.

James calls storytelling a paradox:

“In storytelling, what will happen informs what is happening, and what is happening informs what did. You cannot know where a story needs to go until you know where it’s been, but you cannot know where it needs to have been until you know where it’s going.

It’s a paradox.

And that’s part of the fun.”

He also suggests writing a story as “an integrated whole” rather than writing a first draft for this reason.

5. Trust the fluidity of the process.

Plotting a story out entirely beforehand can lead to what James refers to as “weak” transitions between scenes. Just because a scene seems like a good idea while writing the outline does not mean that it works well within the context of the story. James encourages writers to keep digging and then warns of a real danger for plotters:

“As you learn to feel out the story by constantly exploring what would naturally happen next, you’ll find your characters acting in more believable and honest ways.

Here’s the biggest problem with writing an outline: You’ll be tempted to use it. You’ll get to a certain place and stop digging, even though there might be a lot more of that dinosaur left to uncover.”

6. Re-evaluate continuously.

James offers a lot of ideas for help with this tip:

“Reorient yourself to the context. Print out the previous 50 or 100 pages (once a week I find it helpful to do the whole novel) and read it through the eyes of a reader, not an editor. Remember, readers aren’t looking for what’s wrong with the story; they’re looking for what’s right with it. Continually ask yourself, What are readers wondering about, hoping for and expecting at this moment in the story? Then give it to them.

Draft the scene that would naturally come next. The length and breadth of the scene needs to be shaped by the narrative forces I mentioned earlier.

Go back and rework earlier scenes as needed. What you write organically will often have implications on the story you’ve already written.

Keep track of unanswered questions and unresolved problems. Review them before each read- through of your manuscript.

Come up with a system to organize your ideas as they develop. In addition to files of character descriptions, phrases, clues and so on, I have four word processing files I use to organize my thoughts: 1) Plot Questions, 2) Reminders, 3) Discarded Ideas and 4) Notes.

If you find yourself at a loss for what to write next, come up with a way to make things worse, let the characters respond naturally to what’s happening, write a scene that fulfills a promise you made earlier in the book, or work on a scene you know readers will expect based on your genre and the story you’ve told so far. When you understand the principles of good storytelling, you always have a place to start.

Move into and out of the story, big picture, small picture, focusing one day on the forest and the next day on the trees. Follow these ideas, and stories will unfold before you.”

Thank you, Mr. James, for validating all of us “pantsers” and offering logical, workable ways to write the next novel without an outline.


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Review: Nephilim Prophecy (The God Code) by Adrienne Wilder


Title: Nephilim Prophecy (The God Code)

Author: Adrienne Wilder

Genre: Gay/Fantasy & Paranormal

Publisher: Loose ID LLC

Release Date: November 27, 2012

Jade’s Rating: 5 stars

Book Blurb:

Indigo Black is Palet: a human cursed with the ability to see the Demonic, trained to hunt and kill them. Since the peace Covenant was implemented by the Church, Palet have not been allowed to seek out the Demonic. And the one time Indigo challenged the Covenant nearly cost him the life of his lover and guardian angel, Ariel. Indigo was forced to watch Ariel suffer. They broke his wings and cast him out of Heaven, and the burden of that guilt has cost Indigo everything.

But now the rules are changing. The Demonic have broken the Covenant by creating a creature that should not exist: a Nephilim with a human soul who can withstand being possessed by the most dangerous members of the Demonic Parliament.

With the rise in power of the Demonic, Indigo must face the darkest battles of his life: one which will decide the fate of mankind, and another which will decide the fate of his heart.

Publisher’s Note: This book contains explicit sexual situations, graphic language, and material that some readers may find objectionable: male/male sexual practices, violence (including non-consensual sex).

Read an excerpt here (scroll and click on Excerpt tab)

Jade’s Review:

Anyone who is a fan of gay romance and angels and demons will love this story. Indigo and Ariel’s relationship will draw you in and tug on your heartstrings until the very end. They go through so much that you can’t help but hope against hope that they will be able to work things out and hold onto each other. The characters are well written and have such depth, and the pacing between the romance and the greater plot flows well. I couldn’t put The Nephiliim Prophecy down. I read it almost in one sitting, and it left me aching for more…more of Indigo and Ariel, more of Neko, more of their whole world. A spectacular read.

Buy Nephilim Prophecy (The God Code) at Amazon | Loose Id

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*Please note: I purchased this book myself and chose to write a review for it.

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Book Review: In Blue Poppy Fields by Ciaran Dwynvil


Title: In Blue Poppy Fields

Author: Ciaran Dwynvil

Genre: Gay/Erotic/BDSM/Paranormal/Fantasy

Publisher: Self-Published/Indie

Release Date: March 20, 2013

Jade’s Rating: 5 stars

Book Blurb:

This mesmerizing gay erotic paranormal fantasy belongs to Guardian Demon Series that will hold you prisoner to unforgettable stories of life, love and lust set amid an intriguing fantasy world. Dwynvil’s unique storytelling will captivate you by vivid imagery, narratives told from multiple points of view and explorations of the darker side of D/s theme where safe words aren’t used.

A victim to another man’s cruelty, talented and beautiful theater actor Adhemar Lebeau learned not to trust and not to love anybody but himself. Falsely accused of his master’s murder, he has to accept assistance of mysterious Count Sanyi Arany to later discover his savior is a vampire. Forced both by a fatal illness and aftershocks of torture experienced during his unjust imprisonment, Adhemar agrees to the only possible cure. Rebirth.

Healed in body but not in mind, he guards his independence, free will and heart. He is not able to give love, only the fulfillment of lust. Yet, satiation of sensuous longing is not enough for his Sire and he knows it. When an eerie malady strikes and seems to deplete Sanyi’s life energy for unknown reasons, Adhemar understands his fears and agrees to keep a street boy, Reyach, as a pet for both of them in hope it will soothe the unspoken worries.

Out of necessity he finds himself in the role of the only hunter in their company, and out of attachment he accepts the responsibility readily. Indulgence in blood and carnal pleasures fill his nights and vampiric powers give him the feeling of safety. Until the evening when he carelessly falls prey to High Demon Belial’s plays that quickly turn into more than either of them has bargained for.

In spite of a hard start, Adhemar feels burning urge deep in his heart and no matter how much he denies it, the cause of the strange sensation is a budding seed of affection brought to life by the insufferable demon. But letting Adhemar learn to love somebody other than him is not what seemingly innocent Reyach plans.

Read an excerpt here and here.

Jade’s Review:

Gripping and emotional, sometimes painfully so, In Blue Poppy Fields is yet another masterpiece from the pen of Ciaran Dwynvil. His unique style of storytelling weaves a mesmerizing tale of the lives of his benefactors, as he affectionately refers to them, in their lust for life and love. Having already read the first two books in the Guardian Demon series, Trails of Love I Crawl Parts 1 and 2, I had high expectations for this book, and my expectations were far surpassed.

In Blue Poppy Fields grabs your attention from the very first line when Adhemar Lebeau, beloved diva of the stage adored by all of the audience of Cibinium, finds his master deceased in his bed and the killer long gone. He doesn’t regret the loss as the man had abused him for years but knows that he will be blamed for the crime. And so readers embark on a harrowing journey along with him as he tries desperately first to avoid the blame and then, once the blame has been laid squarely upon his shoulders, to prove his innocence and survive deadly dungeons, ghastly torture methods, and the swift justice of Cibinium. After calling on his savior, the Count Sanyi Arany, the story gets a little more complicated as Adhemar learns he is the Count’s favorite. Tended to by the Count’s man Vincent, who is much more than he seems, but fighting against both Sanyi’s affections and his own illness, Adhemar’s health declines rapidly until drastic measures must be taken in order to save him. Enter the seemingly innocent boy Reyach, a brougham ride to the next city which unexpectedly and inexplicably drains Sanyi of his energy, and later an encounter with High Demon Belial, and Adhemar’s life as the darling of the stage in Cibinium is left far behind him.

Instead he finds himself occupying a different stage, on which he first tests Sanyi’s limits and desires and later finds his own limits pushed to the very edge of breaking by Belial. I’ll note here for potential readers that the book contains elements of BDSM throughout, D/s in particular, so pass on it if that isn’t your cup of tea. I suppose those sections could be skipped over, but you would miss significant moments, leaving gaps in the story. Just as in real life, the sexual and intimate aspect between characters plays a very important role in their lives and interpersonal relationships. The same can be said about the vivid imagery of the torture Adhemar endures while in the dungeon. It is necessary to understand his thought processes and motivations, and it is so well written that I can’t imagine any reader wanting to skip over it.

Just as in the previous books written by Ciaran Dwynvil, the characters in In Blue Poppy Fields will capture readers’ imaginations and steal their hearts. Adhemar longs to be loved and adored by his audience and he deserves every praise and every applause; gentle Sanyi, struggling to accept what he is, just wants for his favorite to return his feelings; their man Vincent who tirelessly takes care of them and somehow knows exactly what each of them needs even when they don’t; Reyach who, because of what he is, can only take and never give anything in return; and Belial…well, we get a taste of his magnificence towards the end of the book and are promised much, much more of it in Part 2.

After the whirlwind ride that had me on the edge of my seat and ended in such euphoria, I was left aching for more. The beautiful writing style, characters that will take hold of your heart and refuse to let go even after the written story ends, catastrophe and triumph, steamy and sensual erotic scenes, heartache, joy…it is all, as the tagline of the series says, a tale of lust for life and love. If that sounds like a story you would enjoy, then In Blue Poppy Fields is the book for you.

Buy In Blue Poppy Fields at: Amazon | Smashwords

Find Ciaran Dwynvil at: his website | his blog | Facebook page | Goodreads | Twitter

*Please note: I loved this book so much that I chose to write a review for it.


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Inspirational Mondays – Show, Don’t Tell

I have decided to start a weekly blog post here on my editing blog called Inspirational Mondays specifically to inspire writers because, after all, editors need writers to keep writing. Otherwise, what would we have to edit? I chose Mondays in particular because it seems we could all use a little inspirational pick-me-up on Monday.

This week’s Inspirational Mondays tip: Show, Don’t Tell!

Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. – Anton Chekov

Showing your readers the imagery in your mind’s eye is so much more effective and spellbinding than simply telling them. As the above quote by Anton Chekov suggests, rather than saying that your character looked out the window at the full moon, tell how the silver light of the full moon sparkled on the gently rippling surface of the quiet lake. Which do you find more interesting?

I would urge every writer, whether aspiring or published, to give Stephen King’s essay titled “Imagery and the Third Eye” a thoughtful read. Considering how many novels and short stories King has written, and how many film adaptations have been made of them, he seems to know what he’s talking about. Here is what King has to say about imagery: “Imagery does not occur on the writer’s page; it occurs in the reader’s mind.”

So what does he mean by that? He uses an example: “It was a spooky house.” Well, that’s all fine and good, but as a reader, it isn’t enough to tell me that the house is spooky. I want to know what makes it spooky. King then quotes a passage from Salem’s Lot in which he describes features of the house that convey a spooky feeling without resorting to using the word directly. He says:

…that imagery is not achieved by over description… To describe everything is to supply a photograph in words; to indicate the points which seem the most vivid and important to you, the writer, is to allow the reader to flesh out your sketch into a portrait.

When writers set out to describe something for readers, they must use what King calls “the eye of imagination and memory” or the third eye. Readers have their own third eye, so it is the job of the writer to describe the scene so well that readers can see it vividly with their third eye of imagination. That requires a writer to be choosy about what to include and what to omit from the description. If it stands out to you as a writer, then emphasize it in your description. If it isn’t important to the mood and tone of the scene, then leave it out. For example, in the excerpt from Salem’s Lot, King emphasized characteristics about the house that conveyed a spooky feeling,  instead of mentioning anything mundane like a garage or a driveway or how many stories it had. Knowing what to leave in and what to take out is part of what makes a great writer, and it takes a great deal of practice and hard work.

What is the key? According to King, it consists of two things: “First, [pledge] not to insult your reader’s interior vision; and second, [pledge] to see everything before you write it.” In the first case, you don’t need to describe everything. Use the active voice rather than the passive voice, be specific with your descriptors and verbs, choose words that will jump out at readers…and then let the readers’ third eye do the rest. In the second case, King says that oftentimes writers stop looking at the scene before they see all there is to see. Sometimes it may mean slowing down and taking your time, but it will be worth it. Says King: “Writers who describe poorly or not at all see poorly with this [third] eye; others open it, but not all the way.”

The bottom line is this: showing and not telling is important, but just as important is carefully choosing what to show your readers. The very successful Stephen King states that images lead to the story and the story leads to all the other things.

But he also says that the writer’s third eye is “a little bit like having a whole amusement park in your head, where all the rides are free.” And isn’t that the most wonderful thing about writing, being able to send your readers on such rides along with you?

*The essay “Imagery and the Third Eye” was written by Stephen King in 1980. Quotes were taken from the essay published at Wordplayer.com.


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Book Review: Busting the Greenhorn by C.C. Williams


Title: Busting the Greenhorn

Author: C.C. Williams

Genre: Gay Erotica/BDSM/Western

Publisher: Self-Published/Indie

Release Date: October 26, 2011

Jade’s Rating: 5 stars

Book Blurb:

Tech blogger, Jake Landon, is on a mini-vacation. Having escaped San Francisco for the quiet Russian River, Jake seeks nothing more than a relaxed three-day-weekend getaway. Stetson-wearing horseman, Chet Hairston, is an old hand at stallion breaking, He’s used to having things his way . . . or else.

Crossing paths one night in a restaurant, the two men begin a game of cat and mouse. Each unfamiliar with their opponent, neither man is sure of the ultimate goal . . . just his own raging desire. Can the strong, masculine rancher rope in Jake’s passion? Could a willing and adventurous city boy be the one to fill that void in Chet’s bed?

Busting The Greenhorn rides hard and puts you away wet!

Read an excerpt here.

Jade’s Review:

I absolutely loved this book! The M/M sub-genre is admittedly my favorite of the romance genre and I think cowboys are so sexy, so of course I loved it. But from a more objective standpoint, Busting the Greenhorn is a very well-written erotic romance about two men who each have a need and unexpectedly find it in each other.

Jake is working too hard after the bad economy began to affect his job, and he desperately needs a vacation and companionship other than his dog. He sets out to find both on a weekend visit to the quiet countryside away from the hustle and bustle. As he is relaxing by the river, he is (happily) interrupted by a cowboy astride a horse and wearing a classic Stetson cowboy hat. Jake is instantly attracted to the man and makes some inquiries as to who he is, glad to find out that he lives nearby. They not-so-coincidentally run into each other at a restaurant, and after clearing up a misunderstanding about who the cowboy came with, hit it off together quite well…well enough that Jake ends up tied up and dominated and loving every second of it. What starts as a weekend fling turns into something more as they meet again when Jake heads to Chet’s ranch for a horseback ride. He discovers that he wants Chet, and not just in his bed. Jake wants him all the time and is surprised to learn that Chet feels the same way about him. The cowboy has a romantic surprise waiting for Jake as they take a break in their ride, and not long after, he gets another chance to “bust the greenhorn.” I don’t want to say more about the plot of the story for fear of giving away something important, but suffice it to say that the last line of the book blurb pretty much says it all – this book “rides hard and puts you away wet!”

Which brings me to one of my favorite things about this book. Even though it is a short read, there is a good balance of erotic and non-erotic scenes. At least I think so. I have read other stories similar in length and have been disappointed in the lack of plot and what comes off to me as simply gratuitous sex. Not so with Busting the Greenhorn. As I summarized above, there is a plot which the story follows. It isn’t a complicated one but it doesn’t have to be. The emotional and sexual tension adds another layer to the plot so that it isn’t just another boy-meets-boy-and-boy-falls-in-love-with-boy story.

Each of the erotic scenes in the book is essential to furthering the plot and enhances the story for me. I don’t think it likely that you would read a scene where two people share a kiss before deciding to turn their lives upside down for one another and find it to be a plausible story. No, you need to see how the intimate moments shape both their thoughts and their emotions before such a decision would seem plausible. Busting the Greenhorn accomplishes this as we follow both Jake and Chet through their sexual experiences, when Chet realizes how much he enjoys breaking in this “young colt” and Jake is led to rethink some things about himself.

That leads me to my next point. Both of the characters are relatable, and the situation in which they find themselves, as well as the ways they each respond to it, is very realistic. They each have inner struggles and insecurities about what the other sees in him and why the other is attracted to him. Jake finds himself nervously saying things around Chet, stumbling over his words, while Chet admits out loud that Jake has him all “discombobulated.” Jake took a chance to have some fun, got more than he bargained for, and stuck to his newfound way of taking risks to gain more than he would have imagined possible if someone had asked him from the relative comfort of his townhouse back in San Francisco.

I thoroughly enjoyed Busting the Greenhorn. It was a fantastic read that held my attention from the first word to the last and was both tender and sensually hot at the same time. I will be looking to read the author’s other books as soon as I can. I highly recommend this book to any reader who is a fan of gay romance, gay erotica, BDSM, cowboys, and/or touching love stories.

Buy Busting the Greenhorn at: C.C. Williams Online Bookstore | ARe | Amazon.com | B & N

Find C.C. Williams at his website | Facebook | Goodreads

*Please note: I won a copy of this book in a contest hosted by the author and chose to write this review.

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Book Review: Magical Night by Karen A. Sullivan

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Title: Magical Night

Author: Karen A. Sullivan

Genre: Contemporary Erotic Romance/BDSM

Publisher: Secret Cravings Publishing

Release Date: January 18, 2013

Jade’s Rating: 4 stars

Book Blurb:

Kay Maclachan cannot speak the words that she holds fast in her heart. Jim will not propose until she does, but he has a plan. He will treat his love to a night of BDSM and domination, teasing all of her senses, and driving her into a white-hot, sexual desire that begs for fulfillment. He will force her to say the words he needs to hear, and enjoy torturing them from her.

Read an excerpt here.

Jade’s Review:

If you are looking for a short erotic story with BDSM elements, then this is for you. I make a point to mention the involvement of BDSM elements because if you do not find pleasure in reading about such a topic, you will not enjoy the majority of the story and will likely miss the climax in your efforts to avoid it. Yes, that pun was definitely intended.

What I liked the most about Magical Night was that Kay’s thoughts and emotions were virtually transparent to readers. Many people outside of the BDSM community, and perhaps some inside the community as well, have a hard time comprehending the mental state and feelings of a submissive in the D/s and BDSM culture. As a result, I appreciated the fact that readers are experiencing along with Kay her emotional highs and lows, her desire, her thoughts, her fear of speaking aloud those little words. At first she doesn’t understand why Jim is doing these things to her; she thinks that she has done something wrong, embarrassed him in front of his colleagues, and that he is punishing her. But as we follow her thoughts through both the emotional and physical sensations she is experiencing, we come to realize along with Kay why he feels it is necessary to do this to her. We read on as she experiences a kind of sexual awakening, which produces exactly the sort of reaction that Jim wanted and leads to her giving him exactly what he wanted to hear.

I also liked the fact that the domination and BDSM elements were portrayed in a positive way, especially after she realized that she was enjoying what he was doing to her. It shows that love and trust are essential to such relationships. It also shows that it has nothing to do with beating a sub/slave senseless, that instead there is much pleasure to be had in such practices.

This last bit is merely my opinion as I most enjoy seeing the story from the perspective of all the characters, and those who enjoy reading a story from the perspective of only or mostly one character may disagree. I would have liked to have experienced more of Jim’s perspective throughout the story. I suppose I understand why not, to build up the suspense for what was to come later. Still, I would have liked to know more of Jim’s thoughts and feelings directly rather than trying to interpret them through Kay’s perceptions. But that is just my opinion. Overall, I found it an enjoyable read for those who like hot erotic short stories that offer more than just vanilla spankings.

Buy Magical Night at: ARe | Amazon.com | Secret Cravings Publishing | B & N

Find Karen A. Sullivan at her blog | Facebook | Goodreads | Pinterest

*Please note: I was given a copy of this book since this review was requested by the author.


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Book Review: Shifting Gears by Petra Lynn

Shifting Gears by Petra Lynn

Title: Shifting Gears

Author: Petra Lynn

Genre: Gay Paranormal Romance

Publisher: Silver Publishing

Release Date: February 2, 2013

Jade’s Rating: 4.5 stars

Book Blurb:

Kenton Palmer finds an injured dog on the road and takes him to the nearest vet only to discover it’s actually a wolf. He decides to nurse the injured animal following the necessary surgery. The handsome vet who treated the wolf offers his own brand of animal attraction, making it clear he’s interested in Kenton.

Gray Fowler is a wolf shifter. Stuck in wolf form after Kenton rescues him, he still falls hard for Kenton. It starts out as jealousy but Gray soon discovers that Kenton’s new love interest, veterinarian Will Barclay, has sinister plans. How are Will’s shady activities linked to the men who injured Gray, and can he expose the scheme before Kenton gets too involved with Will?

Jade’s Review:

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It held my attention so well that I sat down and read it all at once; I kept telling myself that I would stop when I got to the next chapter, and every time I did, I couldn’t stop. I had to find out what happened to Kenton, Will, and Gray.

I am fascinated by the paranormal, and since Gray is a wolf shifter, he quickly became my favorite character. That’s not to say that Kenton and Will were lesser characters. I found the major characters in the book to all be nicely developed, and even the secondary characters had a fair amount of depth. I had a rather difficult time connecting to Will, but I think that is a direct consequence of the book blurb making him seem suspicious before I ever started reading.

Kenton was a wonderfully well-developed character. Readers get lots of background about him that helps to understand his thought processes and motivations. Having had a recent relationship end badly, he understandably wants to takes his time with Will, but he also seems to be a little too trusting and loyal for his own good when it comes to Will. Kenton is a sympathetic and likeable character. After the way he cared about Gray as a wolf, I couldn’t help but to grow fond of him, and I found myself rooting for him and Gray to get together from early in the book.

As a wolf shifter, Gray can shift between full human and full wolf forms. When Kenton finds him injured on the road, he has no idea what Gray really is and just assumes that he is a dog, then takes Will’s word for it when told that Gray is not a dog but a wolf. Gray is forced to stay in wolf form as he heals and grows more and more attached to Kenton while being cared for and staying in his home. The two develop a close relationship that is much more than that of a man and his pet, but still it tortures Gray for wanting there to be more between them. It seems inevitable that a sort of rivalry breaks out between Will and Gray the wolf (or Rain, as Kenton calls him) as they vie for Kenton’s attention. I can’t say more for fear of revealing spoilers, but I found the unusual take on the classic love triangle very interesting to watch and read.

I did encounter one issue while reading “Shifting Gears.” I gave the book a high score, so it didn’t detract from my reading experience very much, but I think it’s worth mentioning. Readers who are looking for a good story with a happy ending may not even notice it. But as a reader and writer with a great deal of interest and experience in the paranormal with regards to fiction, I couldn’t help but notice. Gray is so fixated on Kenton and determined to find out the truth about Will that he hardly gives a passing thought to his pack while in wolf form in Kenton’s care. He tells himself several times that he should go but shuts down that instinct each time to stay a little longer. However, it is later revealed that he is the alpha of his pack, which surprised me a lot, considering. I have a hard time wrapping my head around the fact that any pack wolf, much less the alpha himself, could so easily dismiss his pack and his responsibility to them. Perhaps he had faith that his beta would step up into the role of alpha well while he was away, but I would have liked to see a bit more of a struggle in Gray between responsibility to his pack and his new love interest or, in absence of that, some sort of explanation why the pack wasn’t important then. I also found it a bit disappointing that there were so few details about the shifters’ lives and culture since so much was revealed about Kenton’s life and experiences, but a sequel might be better suited to revealing the details of the wolf shifters.

Overall, I liked this book a lot. It is a strong debut, and I am eager for a sequel. It’s a heartwarming story of two people righting a terrible wrong and overcoming great, if not virtually impossible, odds to find love and happiness. I would recommend “Shifting Gears” to all readers who like strong male characters, and werewolves, in their romance.

Buy Shifting Gears at: Silver Publishing | Amazon.com

Find Petra Lynn at her blog | Facebook | Twitter | Goodreads

*Please note: I purchased my copy of this book and chose to write this review.

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Inspirational Mondays – Demystifying Grammar: Who vs. Whom

I have decided to start a weekly blog post here on my editing blog called Inspirational Mondays specifically to inspire writers because, after all, editors need writers to keep writing. Otherwise, what would we have to edit? I chose Mondays in particular because it seems we could all use a little inspirational pick-me-up on Monday.

This week’s Inspirational Mondays inspirational quote:

Imagery does not occur on the writer’s page, it occurs in the reader’s mind.

– Stephen King

Demystifying Grammar

This is the second week of a series on commonly confused grammar rules I call Demystifying Grammar. Wouldn’t it be great if we understood those confusing and fickle little rules so we could focus on writing? I think so too. It has been said that the English language is one of the hardest to learn, so don’t worry if you need a little help now and then. Welcome to the first week of Demystifying Grammar. Those of you who slept through English class pay attention.


Who vs. Whom

This rule is confusing, and you can’t always use the “whichever sounds best” solution that sometimes works. Fortunately, the rule is easy to follow once you understand the difference between who and whom.

  • Who is used as the subject of a verb or as the complement of a linking verb. It’s what is known as a nominative pronoun, or the subject of a sentence.

Who threw the ball and broke the window?

It was Billy who threw the ball that broke the window.

  • Whom is used as the object of the verb or the object of a preposition. It’s what is known as an objective pronoun, or the direct object.

You asked whom to go the movies?

He’s already going to the dance with whom?

The bottom line: use who if it can be replaced with “he”; if “him” fits better, use whom.

  • If you are struggling with which one to use in a particular sentence, it will help to split the sentence in order to see it.

It was Billy | who (he) threw the ball that broke the window.

You asked whom (him) | to go the movies?

Sometimes in dialogue, purposeful misuse can bring authenticity to a character as correct usage has the potential to sound too formal. When in doubt, just rewrite the sentence and avoid it altogether.


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Inspirational Mondays – Demystifying Grammar: Effect or Affect

I have decided to start a weekly blog post here on my editing blog called Inspirational Mondays specifically to inspire writers because, after all, editors need writers to keep writing. Otherwise, what would we have to edit? I chose Mondays in particular because it seems we could all use a little inspirational pick-me-up on Monday.

This week’s Inspirational Mondays inspirational quote:

Try to leave out the parts that people tend to skip. – Elmore Leonard

Demystifying Grammar

Starting this week, I will be doing a series on commonly confused grammar rules called Demystifying Grammar. Wouldn’t it be great if we understood those confusing and fickle little rules so we could focus on writing? I think so too. It has been said that the English language is one of the hardest to learn, so don’t worry if you need a little help now and then. Welcome to the first week of Demystifying Grammar. Those of you who slept through English class pay attention.


Effect or Affect

How do I know when to use effect and when to use affect?

This one can be very confusing, and I still have to think about it sometimes. But here’s the short answer: effect is a noun while affect is a verb in the vast majority of cases.

  • Effect (noun) – Something (A) has an effect on something else (B).

The beautiful weather had a positive effect on my mood.

In this sentence, the weather (A) has an effect on my mood (B).

  • Affect (verb) – Something (A) affects something else (B).

All the distractions negatively affected my ability to write.

In this sentence, the distractions (A) directly influence the ability to write (B).

The bottom line: when in doubt, assume that effect is a noun and affect is a verb, then use accordingly.

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